Tuesday, 8 March 2016

Panda

Panda
I'm a little panda 
Black and white
Fat and chubby
loves to play in the night

With short arms and a big body
I can take down anybody
I don't like to run at all,
And I am not really that tall.

I live in the trees 
Where I am very happy
I look very bold
and i am very well controlled.
BY :Leilani

3 comments:

  1. I liked how you continued to rhyme and how you described the panda in the poem. Keep up your hard work.

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  2. I like the way you used different type of language features. Keep up the hard work!!

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  3. I like the way you used different type of language features. Keep up the hard work!!

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